Thursday, September 25, 2008

SIREN CALL PART THREE

SEE PART ONE FOR DISCLAIMER


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SCENE XX XIV (WIZENSKY'S HOME THE DEN)



Joyce, "Ray, Honey, you have visitors."(Opens door wide revealing Alex.)

Ray, "Give us a minute would you Joyce, Sweetheart. Everything's fine."




(Alex enters Bobby steps back to let Joyce exit then enters.)


(Bobby closes the door.)



Ray, "I know all about the indictment, Detective. It's a small town"


(Alex looks back at Bobby.)


"Could you turn around?"

(Ray turns, a gun jammed under his chin.)


Alex, "Take it easy...officer."

Ray, "If I die before I'm charged, it's a full pension...for Emily."


"Put the gun down, Ray."

Ray, "What gun? They took my gun away from me. You made sure of that."


"Ray."

(Ray standing and pointing gun at Bobby), "Raines a been dead if it what'nt for you."


"Okay,"


"...it was on me, wasn't on her."


"You need to let my partner go..."

Ray, "Don't move."


"You can see me right, I'm right here."


"Nobody's gonna grab your gun this time."


"And I know that it wasn't your fault because I read the report and you were pulling,"


"......a double shift,"


"...you had a new baby and a lotta nights without sleep."


"And this guy jumps off the bench."


"It happened in one maybe two seconds."

Ray, "I couldn't stop him."


Alex, "Nobody's blaming you."

Ray, "That court reporter, he shot her in the face and I couldn't stop him."


(From behind the door Emily's voice,) "Daddy?"

Ray, "It's alright baby."


Emily, "What are you doing, mom wants to know."

Ray, "Uh...Just give us a minute."


"You've gotta let my partner go...and look after your daughter."

Emily, "Daddy?"


Alex, "Let me talk to her."

Emily, "Daddy?"


"You've got to put the gun on me,"


"...and let my partner go look after your daughter."


Ray, "Put your piece on the desk, and your partner's."

Emily, "Daddy, I'm coming in."

Ray, "Just a minute, baby."


(Alex takes her gun and then Bobby's and lays them on Ray grabs them and drops them behind his desk.)

Ray to Emily, "Hold on a minute."


Ray to Alex, "Now turn around."


(Hands raised Alex turns and walks out of the room.)


(Bobby turns and watches her go then side steps to the couch. Ray follows him holding his gun out and pointed at him.)



"She's a good girl, Emily she's a..."


Ray, "I don't need you to tell me that."


"I know she's...she's precious, you know, she's,


"......she looks like her mother."

Ray, "Joyce, Ashley was killin' her...she abandons her sister doesn't even take care of her own mother."


"You found Emily, she got home safe."

Ray, "Joyce was crying. She couldn't stop shakin'"


"Yeah, but you knew that they were hurting and y..you had to protect them."

Ray, "Joyce didn't even get angry. She was worried about Ashley after everything...tell me how is that possible?"


"I don't know."


"It's mothers..you know..." (He takes a couple of steps towards Ray.)


(Ray jerks his gun up,)
"Back off."


(Bobby steps back.)


"You knew what was going on with her,"


"...you knew what was inside of her."

Ray, "The cancer cells they feed on stress. Joyce was never gonna get better."


"See Ashley was toxic. She was toxic to Joyce."


Ray, "I found her, I found her and told her you need to stop what you're doin'
and give your mother some peace and she laughed at me, and I slapped her and she looked at me, spit in my face, Joyce is never gonna forgive me. (He points the gun back beneath his chin.)


"Hey, she needs you."

(He points the gun back toward Bobby) "How do you know, because of your mother...some cop BS."


"No, my mother is ill,"


"...and I'm all she's got and that's all Joyce's got is you."

Ray, "No. Not anymore."


"Look we can do something here."


"They can help you out."


"They'll hold the charges,"


"...you can spend time with Joyce you can stroke her hair,"


"...hold her hand..."

Ray, "Aw you think I'm dumb, some small town cop who'll roll over for the N.Y.P.D.?"


"I never said that."

Ray mocking, "We can work this out...let my partner go, Ray crap. I let her go cause I don't want to kill her...I want to kill YOU and then me."


"Who's gonna clean up the mess?"


"Your daughter..huh,"


"her mother?"


(Ray picks up a cell phone and tosses it to Bobby,) "Here, call your mom...say goodbye."


"Aw, come on, Ray." (He throws the phone back.)


Bobby stands trying to work a way out in his mind.


Bobby calls out, "Emily?"

Ray, "Shut up."


THE GUN.


"Emily your father needs you to see something."


(Bobby watches Ray closely.)


"Eames?"


Alex, "She's on her way."

Ray, "No!"

Emily, "Daddy?"

Ray, "No, I said no. Back off out there."






)Ray is distracted and Bobby grabs his gun arm. A struggle ensues, Bobby elbows Ray in his abdomen and ribs several times.)


(Ray drops the gun.)



Bobby holding his hands out, "Just stop, now just stop."


"Just stop. Come on, Ray.


"She needs you."


"Okay."

Emily, "Daddy?"


"She needs you...You gotta let it go, okay."


(Bobby gasps to catch his breath in the aftermath.)

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SCENE XX XIII (OUTSIDE THE HOUSE)

(Local cops milling around the yard, Ray being led out in hand cuffs. Bobby and Alex walking toward their SUV.)



Alex, "I'll file the paperwork."


"Take a drive upstate, visit your mom."


(He tilts his head and looks at her.)


Someone screams, "GUN! HE'S GOTTA GUN" (Ray puts the gun under his chin and fires.)


(Alex and Bobby run back to the yard,


...stopping at the sight of Ray's body.)


Officer, "He asked to be cuffed in the front out of respect for his family......he grabbed my weapon."

(Emily followed by her mother rush from the house draw up short and Joyce wraps her arms around her child holding her close.)


(Bobby looks down at Ray,


Then at Joyce and Emily,






...then turns back to look at Alex,


then looks back at the scene.)

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SCENE XX XIII (INSIDE THE SUV)


(Alex is driving Bobby in the passenger seat. He looks over at her the back ahead.)


(She turns her head to looks at him,








the road and back again,)



"You alright?"


Bobby stares off into the distance.)


(He looks over at Alex)


(Then without answering turns away.)


FIN

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Because the end of Season 6 and season 7 were so intense, I'd forgotten how good 'Siren Call' was. Shame the UK channel that showed it decided to censor Ray blowing his head off.

Music Wench said...

Fantastic episode and great caps!

PurpleVixen7 said...

Why Bobby blames himself for this??!!I would say to him:Don't you blame yourself for this!!PLEASE!!!And not to feel blame,he couldn't predicte everything;no matter how smart he is!!
My hart skip a beat,and keep saying something like-OY my,OY omy..O NO Bobby..don't kill my Bobby please.. wathcing BRAVE Bobby!!That man is SOOO BRAVE!!