PLAYING DEAD PART ONE SCENE ONE

SINCE I'M LEAVING FOR ITALY IN THE MORNING AND I HAVE FINISHED SCENE ONE I THOUGHT I'D DROP IT HERE FOR ANYONE INTERESTED. WILL MOVE IT TO LIVE JOURNAL WHEN I GET BACK. I MISSED A LOT WHEN I WATCHED IT. THE WAY BOBBY WORKS THE ROOM AND THE PEOPLE IN IT. HIS MIND JUMPING FROM ONE IDEA TO THE NEXT WITH NO CONNECTION. TELLING TECHS TO DO SOMETHING THEY DO ANYWAY JUST BECAUSE HE'S THINKING OUT LOUD. WOULDN'T MIND BEING DET. FARLEY WITH ALL THE GRABBING AND PULLING AND PUSHING HE DID DURING THE SCENE TO HER. HANDS ON. NICE BACK SHOTS AND FEET.

SAME OLD DISCLOSURE. JUST SKIP TO THE GOOD STUFF BELOW


NOTE: While I have seen SVU, the CSI series, NCIS, and other Television shows scripted & capped, I've only seen one or the other done for LO:CI, so I thought I would try it. I only do this for the joy of it and am receiving no compensation for anything, Mr. Wolf & your legal representatives. I know they all belong to you. And because the action is so fast you can miss so much so it helps seeing it written out.

Disclaimer: LO:CI, the story PLAYING DEAD episode 124, pictures, dialog and action all belong to Dick Wolf. The teleplay is credited to . No copyright infringement intended. Not for sale, no profits being made by myself. My personal use of the episode shared with other avid fans. I have had no access with anyone associated directly or indirectly with LO:CI, not even the cleaning crew, or to the script or any pages from it. Live in Tennessee and no time to travel to NYC to Watergate it.

I do not script everything. If it didn't pertain to Bobby, Alex, Ross or Rodgers directly or indirectly it was omitted. There are other sites like NocostScripts.com that may have the full thing if you need it without caps. I got my copy from Amazon.com. My caps are from that. A note that some caps are not as clear as other sites that concentrate only on caps because I follow the motion with the characters words. Also, I write the dialog the way they speak it, no pause in their speech no pause in the scripting short pause three dots, long pause six dots.

**I'd like to make another note...All cappers struggle with Logos. Those taken directly from TV have those irritating USA HD in the lower right along with any messages to the left. Amazon has a gray box with two silver rectangles in the upper Right. Since I use Amazon, I try to stop short of it or go below when possible to delete it. But there are times that it's right in the middle of Bobby's head so you may see it at times...sorry.

There will be shots of Bobby's back, because that's my weakness and perhaps obsession. For friend's obsessions there are hand shots, tongue, eyelashes, and feet.

CAPS PRECEDE DIALOG.PLAYING DEAD


CRIME SET UP & COMMITTED.

LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI

SCENE ONE CRIME SCENE

Det. Agnes Farley, "When I heard who she was, I figured Major Case should be on this."


Alex, "It's a tough week for councilman Hayes-Fitzgerald...bribery scandal and his daughter's the victim of a shootout."



Det. Farley, "Yeah, I'm told she's actually his step-daughter."


Bobby, "And he is?"



Det. Farley, "Richard Siebert, twenty-five, unemployed...uh..."





Det. Farley, "Live-in boyfriend."


Alex, "Not the nice guy you'd bring home to meet the folks."


Bobby, "Is this her place......his?"



Det. Farley, "Her parents pay the rent."





Alex, "Did she talk to anybody before they took her to Belle Vue?"



Det. Farley, "Uh...when I got here, she was already in the ambulance."


Bobby, "You should take that computer in for a complete download."


"Looks like there's interest in her step-dad's problems."






Bobby, "From the notes on these magazines looks like she enjoyed them."






Dr. Liz Rodgers, "I just spoke with the E.R."





Liz, "A bullet was removed from the girl's left shoulder..."






"...It was the same bullet that went through him so it's pretty deformed...to be okay."


Bobby, "Deadbolt is not broken but the jam's splintered."


Bobby, "Detective?"


"You're him..."






Bobby, "So, he comes to the door he unlocks the bolt the killer hears that..."


"And he kicks the door in..."


Bobby, "You jump back."


"...grabs the lamp throws it."


Alex, "And Stacy's on the couch..."


"...she jumps up."


Bobby, "He turns to protect her..."






Bobby, "The killer fires again the bullet passes through him hits her..."


"...he hits the ground..."


"...and bleeds out."


"Why was he moved?"
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Liz, "The mother found Stacy pinned under him."


Alex, "Under his dead body? For how long?"


Liz, "From the lividity three or four hours. Maybe she saved herself by playing dead?"


Bobby, "Or the killer only wanted him."

VINCENT MISSED BLOGS AND ME

Well, I've worked and worked getting ready for my Italy trip so I've been behind on my blog watching (have not been lurking). Made some time to doodle a few drabbles (don't consider them fan fic since they're so short and no case file, for LIVE JOURNAL. If you are interested there's a link over there on the left.

In other news, when Vincent came to the Film Festival here, it was held at the Green Hills Theater (The ritzy/artsy part of Nashville, new money rich but not to be confused with Belle Meade--the OLD MONEY SECTION of Nashville) just a mile from Vanderbilt Medical Center, where I was working...oh, the agony...every single night.

So, I hit all the media sources. TV...WKRN NBC's network had footage which is all over the web. Every other station were too caught up in the excitement that was William Shatner. PLEEZZZ give me a frigging break. Him all over the news and entertainment sections.

Hit up my pal at the Nashville Tennessean Newspaper and found just one head shot of Vincent. You'll find it at the bottom. Even the Green Hills theatrical paper only mentioned him in print and from what I hear Shatner just sailed in like some arrogant king while Vincent worked the Red Carpet and crowd.


As for the new season, yes I've downloaded the first two episodes but haven't started working on the caps and scripts (Italy pending). But there is too much of guest stars and not enough Vincent or Kate to suit me.

Missed you all. Two days off then four more twelve hour night shifts then Italy. At least my sister has a satellite system computer so I can check out your blogs from there and maybe send you a snapshot or two.

EGG CHALLENGE THURSDAY100PLUS

I know I know I was going away but my drabble muse got tuned up. please still read the following one and someone answer my question. Thanks


TITLE: EGG CHALLENGE (Criminal Intent 100)
FLAVOR: Criminal Intent
CHARACTERS: GOREN/LOGAN
WORD COUNT: 300
RATING: M (language)




Bobby sat across the booth from Logan. Both having emptied nearly two pitchers of beer.

Bobby took a sip, “Aw, hell Mike, what the fuck are you gonna do in Key West?”

“Sheriff.”

“In fuckin’ Florida, who do you know in Florida?”

“You can come visit me.”

“I hate the the fuckin’ beach. You’re gonna be bored outta your mind.”

“Nah, I sold my apartment got my retirement checks rolling it all into U.S. Treasury Bonds. I get free livin’ space and an expense account, a nice car and seven deputies out over the Keys. Five-ten years I’ll retire...HEY!" his palm slammed onto the table, "When you're ready to retire or just had enough of the damn politics, sell your apartment, gather your retirement and come on down. We’ll open a bar together.”

Bobby blinked at him, “Mike, you got New York bred into you just like me. How ya gonna leave it behind.”

'Fuckin' freeze my balls off in the winter and fry a goddam egg on the sidewalk in the summer.”

“In Key West we’ll have tropical breezes...”

“Fuckin’ hurricanes...’

Deep sea fishin’...”

“Fuckin’ sharks...”

“Sunny weather...”

“Fuckin' sun burn, sun poison...”

“Damn it to hell, Bobby.”

“Mosquitoes...”

“Women in bikinis”

“Alligators...”

“Women in little bitty bikinis.”

“Sand...”

“Hot women in little bitty bikinis.”

“Mold...”

“Horny hot women in little bitty bikinis.”

Before Bobby could think of another negative, “There we’ll be, two big studly retired New York cops, serving drinks by day, satisfying the horny hot women minus the bikinis at night.”

“So,” he gave him the classic Logan look, “had a better offer?”

“Aw Mike.”

They struggled out of the booth and lurched into the street. Mike put his arm around Bobby's shoulders, “So, see you on your next vacation.”

“Aw Mike.”

“Just think, Logan and Goren...together again.”

Vincent igored

I am just so frustrated. I check the major entertainment papers (ie. VARIETY etc.) and the major newspapers (New York, Chicago, LA, Miami, etc) expecting something. AND ALL I FIND ARE REFERENCES TO Jeff Goldblum the new LEAD episode starting next week.

I realize Vincent's episode was a good old fashioned early type version of the show but hell the man was in it and he was gorgeous and his acting wonderful. They took their spot in Cable for the night and for the week Wrestling SpongeBob Hannah Montana and In Plain Sight listed before them and that doesn't include DVR taped and watched a different day.

Goldblum was on Letterman last night and I was curious as to what he said but our local station froze in the middle of the Top Ten and didn't return until the middle of Craig. Someone tell me what was said.

I'm sorry but I'm tired of hearing Jeff called the new lead of the series with a side mention that Vincent will be starring every other week opposite him. I was looking for accolades & pictures and just found aggravation. Am going to stop searching. You put Vincent in their search engines and get Jeff or a reference to 70 lbs. for Pyle in FMJ. Like he's never done anything else in all these years. Makes me want to scream.

I am going away for a few days to the land of LO:CI and Bobby and cap and script the first episode of the season and get stirred up in other ways.

The only pictures Variety deigned to exhibit:

NO SPOILERS

JUST WATCHED SEASON EIGHT'S FIRST NEW EPISODE GOREN/EAMES. MY HUSBAND SAID AT THE END..GOOD SOLID CASE FILE.

I said HUH. Oh yeah. Now I WILL HAVE TO STAY UP AND WATCH IT AGAIN (POOR ME) BECAUSE THE FIRST TIME I NEVER GOT PAST BOBBY.

UNTIL TOMORROW WHEN I CAN HAVE THE EPISODE FROM AMAZON TO BEGIN SCRIPTING AND CAPPING.

I'M HAPPY. BOBBY LOOKS HEALTHY AND GORGEOUS. THE MAN HAS A SET OF SHOULDERS AND ACRES OF BACK. SIGH

VINCENT D'ONOFRIO--LITTLE NEW YORK

Once again Vincent's independent film is being taken over by an European Distributor, apparently French since that's what the subtitles are. They have more Vincent in the previews than Hawke. Suits me.

Thanks to OUR FRENCH FRIENDS FOR RELEASING THEIR TWO PREVIEWS SO COULD CAP.






























YOU CAN CATCH ONE OF THE PREVIEWS AS VIDEO ON LOZZYCAP'S SITE.