PLAYING DEAD

Well here we've seen four badly written episodes of Goren and Eames. Why last years A-list writers were replaced with C-list writers is maybe so Jeff could come out strong. Even Vincent has trouble carrying the show because he is in the show MUCH LESS with the guest stars having more lines. And they have Bobby not being Bobby. This guy is slow and pondering. Bobby couldn't sit still and spoke so fast trying to keep up with his thoughts. Did these writers never ever watch the show?

Enough bitching. I still, because of my great love of the man and his craft, have finally finished scripting and capping the first episode PLAYING DEAD, which I enjoyed more as I read the dialog. The next three should move faster. Not working as much only three 12 hour night shifts a week instead of five, no travel plans until fall and have the home front settled and hubby happy.

If you're interested in reading the episode it's linked on my home page or go to CI_DIALOG_CAPS.

Here's to hoping LO:CI survives the season with these half-assed writers so we'll have another season perhaps with better writers and producers.

And now a little something for those with the Goren fetishes.

Mine...that strong broad back.



OMG LOOK AT THESE SHOULDERS!



THOSE LIPS PUCKER FORE A KISS?


A BIT OF TONGUE...



EYELASHES


THE HEAD TILT


HAND ON THE THIGH


SIZE THIRTEENS


HANDS HOLDING A WEAPON



SO THERE YOU HAVE IT. DO YOU HAVE A FAVORITE BOBBY POSE? DID YOU ENJOY?

PLAYING DEAD PART ONE SCENE ONE

SINCE I'M LEAVING FOR ITALY IN THE MORNING AND I HAVE FINISHED SCENE ONE I THOUGHT I'D DROP IT HERE FOR ANYONE INTERESTED. WILL MOVE IT TO LIVE JOURNAL WHEN I GET BACK. I MISSED A LOT WHEN I WATCHED IT. THE WAY BOBBY WORKS THE ROOM AND THE PEOPLE IN IT. HIS MIND JUMPING FROM ONE IDEA TO THE NEXT WITH NO CONNECTION. TELLING TECHS TO DO SOMETHING THEY DO ANYWAY JUST BECAUSE HE'S THINKING OUT LOUD. WOULDN'T MIND BEING DET. FARLEY WITH ALL THE GRABBING AND PULLING AND PUSHING HE DID DURING THE SCENE TO HER. HANDS ON. NICE BACK SHOTS AND FEET.

SAME OLD DISCLOSURE. JUST SKIP TO THE GOOD STUFF BELOW


NOTE: While I have seen SVU, the CSI series, NCIS, and other Television shows scripted & capped, I've only seen one or the other done for LO:CI, so I thought I would try it. I only do this for the joy of it and am receiving no compensation for anything, Mr. Wolf & your legal representatives. I know they all belong to you. And because the action is so fast you can miss so much so it helps seeing it written out.

Disclaimer: LO:CI, the story PLAYING DEAD episode 124, pictures, dialog and action all belong to Dick Wolf. The teleplay is credited to . No copyright infringement intended. Not for sale, no profits being made by myself. My personal use of the episode shared with other avid fans. I have had no access with anyone associated directly or indirectly with LO:CI, not even the cleaning crew, or to the script or any pages from it. Live in Tennessee and no time to travel to NYC to Watergate it.

I do not script everything. If it didn't pertain to Bobby, Alex, Ross or Rodgers directly or indirectly it was omitted. There are other sites like NocostScripts.com that may have the full thing if you need it without caps. I got my copy from Amazon.com. My caps are from that. A note that some caps are not as clear as other sites that concentrate only on caps because I follow the motion with the characters words. Also, I write the dialog the way they speak it, no pause in their speech no pause in the scripting short pause three dots, long pause six dots.

**I'd like to make another note...All cappers struggle with Logos. Those taken directly from TV have those irritating USA HD in the lower right along with any messages to the left. Amazon has a gray box with two silver rectangles in the upper Right. Since I use Amazon, I try to stop short of it or go below when possible to delete it. But there are times that it's right in the middle of Bobby's head so you may see it at times...sorry.

There will be shots of Bobby's back, because that's my weakness and perhaps obsession. For friend's obsessions there are hand shots, tongue, eyelashes, and feet.

CAPS PRECEDE DIALOG.PLAYING DEAD


CRIME SET UP & COMMITTED.

LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI

SCENE ONE CRIME SCENE

Det. Agnes Farley, "When I heard who she was, I figured Major Case should be on this."


Alex, "It's a tough week for councilman Hayes-Fitzgerald...bribery scandal and his daughter's the victim of a shootout."



Det. Farley, "Yeah, I'm told she's actually his step-daughter."


Bobby, "And he is?"



Det. Farley, "Richard Siebert, twenty-five, unemployed...uh..."





Det. Farley, "Live-in boyfriend."


Alex, "Not the nice guy you'd bring home to meet the folks."


Bobby, "Is this her place......his?"



Det. Farley, "Her parents pay the rent."





Alex, "Did she talk to anybody before they took her to Belle Vue?"



Det. Farley, "Uh...when I got here, she was already in the ambulance."


Bobby, "You should take that computer in for a complete download."


"Looks like there's interest in her step-dad's problems."






Bobby, "From the notes on these magazines looks like she enjoyed them."






Dr. Liz Rodgers, "I just spoke with the E.R."





Liz, "A bullet was removed from the girl's left shoulder..."






"...It was the same bullet that went through him so it's pretty deformed...to be okay."


Bobby, "Deadbolt is not broken but the jam's splintered."


Bobby, "Detective?"


"You're him..."






Bobby, "So, he comes to the door he unlocks the bolt the killer hears that..."


"And he kicks the door in..."


Bobby, "You jump back."


"...grabs the lamp throws it."


Alex, "And Stacy's on the couch..."


"...she jumps up."


Bobby, "He turns to protect her..."






Bobby, "The killer fires again the bullet passes through him hits her..."


"...he hits the ground..."


"...and bleeds out."


"Why was he moved?"
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Liz, "The mother found Stacy pinned under him."


Alex, "Under his dead body? For how long?"


Liz, "From the lividity three or four hours. Maybe she saved herself by playing dead?"


Bobby, "Or the killer only wanted him."