Sunday, May 31, 2009

PLAYING DEAD SCENE 17

And so I am back and I had to work five straight nights in a row took a couple of days to recover. Am still going through my photos from Italy, will post when I get them figured out. MEANWHILE back to Bobby. I finished the first half of PLAYING DEAD on the plane rides across the Atlantic and am now working on the last half.

Just finished the 17th scene and am posting it here since this is all I'm working on and my blog has been neglected. I love this scene, Bobby's protectiveness, his vulnerability. Again causing himself pain to connect with a victim. Enjoy.

BY THE BY Mr. Wolf, since my disclaimer is over on LJ, I know they belong to you. Am only sharing the words and caps with others who love your guys. No profits had here.

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SCENE 17.....HOSPITAL ROOM






Nurse, "Dr. Lansing, our attending psychiatrist, wants to stop by when you feel you're ready."








Stacy, "He needn't bother."





Nurse, "You're on suicide watch until he approves your release."


Stacy, "I'm in no hurry to leave."







Bobby, "The information you gave us about Rick was very helpful."



Stacy, "I'm glad someone was helped."


Bobby, "I was wondering if you're feeling well enough..."


"...to look at some photos?"


"If you see the man that you described,"


"...just tell me."



Stacy, "Do we know why he shot Rick."


"No, we don't know that yet."


Bobby notices Stacy's HR and BP rising and turns to see the Councilman coming into the room.






"We just need a few more minutes ."



Councilman, "She needs her rest."


"Maybe you could just go......back over there."






Stacy, "I'm fine."





Stacy, "Actually, I don't think I'm ready to do something like this."


"It's okay."


"You've been through a lot."


"I understand."









"It must've been tough,"


"...being in that situation back at home."



"You don't know anything about that."


"That's not true."


"I came from......a bad home."


"You said when bad thing are happening."


"You need to......take yourself away to another place"


"And that's what I used to do I used to just want to lift myself up,"


"...and take myself to another place,"


"So, I could see things from somewhere else."



Stacy, "Maybe it was just the crack."





"I think we both know that that's not true."



Stacy, "I know what you're thinking......you're wrong."














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2 comments:

val said...

Welcome back. Glad you had a good time - and a profitable one (nice way to spend a plane journey!)

Bobby's wonderful when he's empathising.

Anonymous said...

welcome back - just in time for a NEW Bobby episode ;0)