Saturday, May 9, 2009

PLAYING DEAD PART ONE SCENE ONE

SINCE I'M LEAVING FOR ITALY IN THE MORNING AND I HAVE FINISHED SCENE ONE I THOUGHT I'D DROP IT HERE FOR ANYONE INTERESTED. WILL MOVE IT TO LIVE JOURNAL WHEN I GET BACK. I MISSED A LOT WHEN I WATCHED IT. THE WAY BOBBY WORKS THE ROOM AND THE PEOPLE IN IT. HIS MIND JUMPING FROM ONE IDEA TO THE NEXT WITH NO CONNECTION. TELLING TECHS TO DO SOMETHING THEY DO ANYWAY JUST BECAUSE HE'S THINKING OUT LOUD. WOULDN'T MIND BEING DET. FARLEY WITH ALL THE GRABBING AND PULLING AND PUSHING HE DID DURING THE SCENE TO HER. HANDS ON. NICE BACK SHOTS AND FEET.

SAME OLD DISCLOSURE. JUST SKIP TO THE GOOD STUFF BELOW


NOTE: While I have seen SVU, the CSI series, NCIS, and other Television shows scripted & capped, I've only seen one or the other done for LO:CI, so I thought I would try it. I only do this for the joy of it and am receiving no compensation for anything, Mr. Wolf & your legal representatives. I know they all belong to you. And because the action is so fast you can miss so much so it helps seeing it written out.

Disclaimer: LO:CI, the story PLAYING DEAD episode 124, pictures, dialog and action all belong to Dick Wolf. The teleplay is credited to . No copyright infringement intended. Not for sale, no profits being made by myself. My personal use of the episode shared with other avid fans. I have had no access with anyone associated directly or indirectly with LO:CI, not even the cleaning crew, or to the script or any pages from it. Live in Tennessee and no time to travel to NYC to Watergate it.

I do not script everything. If it didn't pertain to Bobby, Alex, Ross or Rodgers directly or indirectly it was omitted. There are other sites like NocostScripts.com that may have the full thing if you need it without caps. I got my copy from Amazon.com. My caps are from that. A note that some caps are not as clear as other sites that concentrate only on caps because I follow the motion with the characters words. Also, I write the dialog the way they speak it, no pause in their speech no pause in the scripting short pause three dots, long pause six dots.


**I'd like to make another note...All cappers struggle with Logos. Those taken directly from TV have those irritating USA HD in the lower right along with any messages to the left. Amazon has a gray box with two silver rectangles in the upper Right. Since I use Amazon, I try to stop short of it or go below when possible to delete it. But there are times that it's right in the middle of Bobby's head so you may see it at times...sorry.

There will be shots of Bobby's back, because that's my weakness and perhaps obsession. For friend's obsessions there are hand shots, tongue, eyelashes, and feet.

CAPS PRECEDE DIALOG.
PLAYING DEAD



CRIME SET UP & COMMITTED.

LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI LOCI

SCENE ONE CRIME SCENE


Det. Agnes Farley, "When I heard who she was, I figured Major Case should be on this."


Alex, "It's a tough week for councilman Hayes-Fitzgerald...bribery scandal and his daughter's the victim of a shootout."



Det. Farley, "Yeah, I'm told she's actually his step-daughter."


Bobby, "And he is?"



Det. Farley, "Richard Siebert, twenty-five, unemployed...uh..."





Det. Farley, "Live-in boyfriend."


Alex, "Not the nice guy you'd bring home to meet the folks."


Bobby, "Is this her place......his?"



Det. Farley, "Her parents pay the rent."





Alex, "Did she talk to anybody before they took her to Belle Vue?"



Det. Farley, "Uh...when I got here, she was already in the ambulance."


Bobby, "You should take that computer in for a complete download."


"Looks like there's interest in her step-dad's problems."






Bobby, "From the notes on these magazines looks like she enjoyed them."






Dr. Liz Rodgers, "I just spoke with the E.R."





Liz, "A bullet was removed from the girl's left shoulder..."






"...It was the same bullet that went through him so it's pretty deformed...to be okay."


Bobby, "Deadbolt is not broken but the jam's splintered."


Bobby, "Detective?"


"You're him..."






Bobby, "So, he comes to the door he unlocks the bolt the killer hears that..."


"And he kicks the door in..."


Bobby, "You jump back."


"...grabs the lamp throws it."


Alex, "And Stacy's on the couch..."


"...she jumps up."


Bobby, "He turns to protect her..."






Bobby, "The killer fires again the bullet passes through him hits her..."


"...he hits the ground..."


"...and bleeds out."


"Why was he moved?"
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Liz, "The mother found Stacy pinned under him."


Alex, "Under his dead body? For how long?"


Liz, "From the lividity three or four hours. Maybe she saved herself by playing dead?"


Bobby, "Or the killer only wanted him."

3 comments:

Frances said...

Your a Legend, Basric.

Absolutely Awesome.

Thanks for posting this, enjoy your trip.

val said...

Have a great time in Italy. Post lots of pictures for us when you get back!

Anonymous said...

Safe trip to Europe - thanks for leaving us with Bobby ;0)